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Thank you for all the kind comments and possible leads to new direction.
I would especially like to thank the anonymous poster for the language corrections. They are fairly good. Well the person said my story was fairly good. So were their corrections. Except for one, missed the boat on a word definition. Rather than explain it here, read Ninth Grade 1958-1959 to see what was wrong.
Actually I do not mind having my errors pointed out. I am trying to learn. It has 56 years since freshman English.
Well you missed your chances. I posted My Summer Vacation 1958 and had no negative emails. The score seems reasonable for a first effort so I am writing more. I give great Thanks to my wife for her proof reading and editing.
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