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Author's Description:
Tara and Tom tried out for the school play and got the leading parts. But there's a love scene and the director suggests it will be more believable if they get to know each other so they can "get into the scene". Did Tom misunderstand? He's in the scene, but he gets into HER instead.
Size: 28 KB (5,548 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, First, Petting, Slow
Tara and Tom tried out for the school play and got the leading parts. But there's a love scene and the director suggests it will be more believable if they get to know each other so they can "get into the scene". Did Tom misunderstand? He's in the scene, but he gets into HER instead.
Size: 28 KB (5,548 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, First, Petting, Slow
Review by Stormy Weather [other reviews by Stormy Weather]
Reviewed:
If the two kids in this story had been earning points to obtain their Thespian pin, they could have gotten all the points needed in this one performance!
I noticed a typo -- maybe two -- but otherwise, Bob's story, which is on the sweet side, is as flawless as the performance given by the two young folks on stage.
Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
