After a long, bitter divorce, he's headed back home for some much needed relaxation with old friends. A chance encounter at a diner is going to show that under the right circumstances, coming in third is a real win.
Size: 43 KB (8,308 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Oral Sex, Revenge
Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin]
Reviewed:
If you are looking for a story with a sex scene stronger than most here on SOL, this may be the story for you. It not the plot, it is a shorter story than most I review, it isn't the characters, it is hard to develop them in a day or so of events, but wow, one of the better erotic events you will be treated to.
Doing the numbers, Plot is a 7, a B. Nothing wrong with it but it is better than average but not enough action to be an A. Technical seemed OK to me, I gave it an 8, an A, I can't say anything bad about it, but I was distracted by the action I was reading. Appeal is another 8, an A, but not supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. Its just sex, and basically just one scene, although it seems to last most of the night.
If you don't like this one, sorry about that. I thought it was well worth bringing to readers attention.
