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Jacob's story.

ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

If you are not reading Jacob's story by writer406 you are missing probably the best story on this site.
https://storiesonline.net/n/27757/jacob-s-story

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

I'll second that! It is a work in progress and one of the few stories in a long time that I look forward to new chapters being posted!

Sun Seeker

REP ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

I agree it is a very good story. However, I follow a large number of authors and some of them wrote stories that are as good or better.

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ

@REP

However, I follow a large number of authors and some of them wrote stories that are as good or better.

Wow, nothing like trying to knock a new writer down a peg or 2...

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@REP

I started reading it, but when the protagonist kept looking in the mirror to remind himself of what he looked like, I opted to leave the story at least for the time being. But I added it to the end of my 'perhaps worth another try later' queue.

AJ

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

Here's a review (not by me) for anyone interested...

https://storiesonline.net/library/get_review.php?id=27757

SunSeeker

doctor_wing_nut ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

Good, great, better, best, I don't really care. I'm just glad I found it, and I sure hope writer 406 has more work of this quality to share.

Reading that was time well-spent. Thanks!

ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

If I had one complaint it would be how short the chapters are but he cheated me there by posting multiple chapters at a time.

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