Well I just uploaded the last chapter to the story. I appreciate everyone that read to the end. I definitely did not intend for the story to go down the path that it did when I started writing, but some of it was for creative purposes, since who wants to read a story where every choice has no negative consequences, but also some of the choices were things that were worst case scenarios that had been imagined. If your fantasy is cuckolding, then what happens if your wife falls in love with someone else? If you enjoy BDSM, what happens if there is an accident? Do you stay down if you are kicked or do you figure out a way to move forward? I am curious to see how the readers feel about Kris at the end of the story. Spoiler alert, do not keep reading until you have finished the story. I tried to write her as a realistic person, who has sacrificed her own wants and desires but eventually gets fed up. I see her as someone that Dawn manipulated, and as someone who got caught in the emotion and did not really think through the totality of her actions before she started and then each step felt like a small one. If I completely missed the mark, let me know. The story is told through Jim's journey, but he pretty much accepts the path laid out for him. Kris was the interesting character for me.