Some of you will be happy to know I have almost completed Book 1 of The Babysitter. Then you'll be unhappy that I won't be posting the last chapters just yet. I have completely rewritten an element of Emma's character; it will help explain some things. I have changed Evan from XY to XXY. I had originally planned to do that all along I was just going to reveal it in book 2. I had to reveal it early to smooth out a wrinkle. Karen has 38D breasts, and Katie has 36C breasts, so why would Evan/Emma not have breasts? I gave him/her 28B breasts. It is the average size of breasts an intersex (XXY) person would have if large breasts were common in the family, according to my Google search, even if the ovaries are underdeveloped. There will still be the internal struggle caused by being brought up as a male for 14 years. But having natural breasts will remove some of the fear of being caught. She can be seen topless while still refusing to remove her panties in front of others when changing clothes. Even with breasts Emma will still think she is a boy and still try to push Eric away. I will keep the romance between them, I mostly wanted a way to express the underlying element of why children take to her so easily and explain Sophie's reaction to Emma. I hope my changes make the story better.
I also cleaned up the errors people pointed out and changed the story to 1st person POV. I hope I didn't spoil too much of the story. Also, I won't pull the story and repost it, so there won't be a need to bookmark it again or re-add it to your favorites.
Later in the day
I suddenly have an urge to make The Babysitter more adult-oriented.
Option 1: Continue the story as is. (more young Adult/ Teen oriented)
Option 2: Rewrite it, focusing more on the effect Emma has on Autistic children and later her inner circle of friends.
Option 3: add nudity safely and tastefully. (more of an over-18 audience)
I don't know how to do a poll on here so this will have to do. PM me with your vote.