I'm happy to announce that Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder has been completed. It's been a good five months of work, but the long story is over. Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder hits home, quite literally.
Set after the events of Gabatrix: Veleshar, Earth stands alone, as most of the human race have long abandoned the planet. The remaining human survivors are left to fair for themselves, having been handed over to the T'rintar clan as a bargaining chip for the UWA/T'rintar alliance. Earth remains a toxic wasteland, made barren by the deadly pollutants, ashen fallout, and Orange Muck that perforates the oceans and water supplies. However, many of the Earthers have not given up. The survivors continue to live off the landscape despite being left out of the bargaining table. A lone rancher, scavenger, and opportunist prepares to embark on a journey that few dare to try as they continue to live under the confines of their dome sanctuaries.
This is another fan-driven story made to expand Gabatrix's story environment. It's been a while since I posted on Storiesonline, but I have a lot of goodies that have come forth. I have three Gabatrix audiobooks made, with a 4th one coming around the corner. Both Gabatrix: The Violet Wave and Gabatrix: The Silver Rain, final editions have been updated on Storiesonline along with the updates hitting Bookapy as well. These editions are overhauls designed to improve dialogue, remove errors, and overall make the stories better than ever before. Many of your comments to me go a long ways to make Gabatrix better and better. :)
With that said, there are a few things to mention. Some of my disclaimers have a tendency not to get put up when I upload onto Storiesonline. I ask to be respectful and polite. As mentioned in my past blog posts, I don't know if there is an attempt to derail new stories that are posted on Storiesonline or not. Gabatrix: Veleshar might have been a victim to potential troll voter bombing. It slowly crept up, but I noticed that the score was very low at first, almost as if some individuals were trying to leave purposeful 2s or 3s and walking away after each chapter was uploaded (if they were even reading it at all). If it turns out to be true, then I'll have no choice but to take the story down and resubmit it to Storiesonline just to purge the troll votes. Then, if I had the option, I would just remove the ability to vote because some are purposely engaging in sabotage.
I upload my stories on Storiesonline to receive feedback. I always welcome positive and constructive comments, and they become helpful in stories like First Peace, Violet Wave, and Silver Rain, getting a major update in turn. In other words, your words matter to me instead of a number that is only used to encourage or discourage future readers from jumping in. If you like the story, give it a good grade. If it isn't your thing, then there are plenty of other stories that are uploaded by other talented writers to enjoy. I do the best that I can to make content for people to enjoy. As I tried to say in my disclaimers: "The opinions stated in the story may not necessarily reflect the opinions of the author. This is a story. Treat it as such." I have to actually put that up because a few individuals, such as SJWs or other individuals, treat the story extremely seriously. Receiving feedback does a lot in improving the quality of a piece. Never feel afraid to tell me that I made an error in a chapter because mistakes happen. We're human, after all. It's how things improve.
Anyways, thank you for your continued support and supporting the other writers on Storiesonline. Enjoy Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder, and stay tuned to Gabatrix: The Last Tank. :)
Gabatrix Website:
https://www.gabatrix.net
For those that are interested in the full story order of my books:
1.) Ariadne and the Tales of Heroes
2.) Ryujin and the Tales of Heroes
3.) Taweret and the Tales of Heroes
4.) Ayida-Weddo and the Tales of Heroes
5.) Helsing and the Tales of Heroes
6.) Gabatrix: Minerva
7.) Opet and the Tales of Heroes
8.) Gabatrix: The First Peace
9.) The Garden of New Olympia (Set around the Gabatrix series)
10.) The Garden of New Olympia 2 (Set around the Gabatrix series)
11.) Gabatrix: The Magenta Racer
12.) Gabatrix: The Violet Wave
13.) Gabatrix: The Silver Rain
14.) Gabatrix: The Terrorists of Batrice
15.) Gabatrix: The Shira Maneuver
16.) Gabatrix: The Warrior of Silence
17.) Gabatrix: The Cipra Campaign
18.) Gabatrix: Legacy
19.) Gabatrix: Relics
20.) Gabatrix: Force and Vehemence
21.) Gabatrix: The Pirates of Palora
22.) Gabatrix: Veleshar
23.) Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder
Or just Gabatrix,
1.) Gabatrix: Minerva
2.) Gabatrix: The First Peace
3.) Gabatrix: The Magenta Racer
4.) Gabatrix: The Violet Wave
5.) Gabatrix: The Silver Rain
6.) Gabatrix: The Terrorists of Batrice
7.) Gabatrix: The Shira Maneuver
8.) Gabatrix: The Warrior of Silence
9.) Gabatrix: The Cipra Campaign
10.) Gabatrix: Legacy
11.) Gabatrix: Relics
12.) Gabatrix: Force and Vehemence
13.) Gabatrix: The Pirates of Palora
14.) Gabatrix: Veleshar
15.) Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder