Hello readers,
It has been a heck of a seven days for engagement on my stories, thank you so much. Lots of readthroughs on a lot of my work, welcome to the new readers.
I posted The Girl at the Motel Pool on Wednesday and while readership was high, and the score higher than expected, I had some negative feedback. It was specifically regarding the female character, Chelsea, in the story. Several readers thought she seemed too young, most of that falls on me.
I was going for a specific type of female build mixed with a lonely, desperate for attention girl. In my mind, she looked like Ariel Tylor (check out pics from Nubiles for reference). But the pushback from some was severe from few people, so I wanted to ask if I should pull the story and/or re-write the character.
I also wanted to ask about what my next story serial will be. I have one cooking that will be an incest story. After that, I wanted feedback on what my readers would like me to write next.
Options are:
1. Slow Story (like The Creek)
2. Something with more sex (like Peeping Tammy)
3. Something different
4. I don't care, do whatever
The Creek part 4, is this weekend. Readers have increased on each chapter, thank you for that.
One final note. I always love feedback and discourse from readers but recently they haven't been constructive or pleasant. You are welcome not to like my work or me, but if you message insults, inflammatory things, or weird 'gotcha's, I'm going to start blocking people. I do this for fun, and it's starting to not be that. I'm not a professional, I'm just a guy who wanted to pay back all the great stories he's read over the years with a few of my own mediocre ones.
Thank you for reading,
-ghostwritten
PS. You may have seen this post before. The site buried the original, I think, because I put a link to a survey in the post. I removed the link, sorry to the 1 person that answered the survey, but thanks for trying it.