From oldjim50
Good story, some word choices are wrong, detract from enjoying the story.
From: Thodge1945
Thank you for reading it. Terry.
From oldjim50
Are you using AI to help write stories?
From: Thodge1945
Here's how I write.
First, I write a paragraph in my own words using word360. I then run the Word360 editor. I then run the QuilBot grammar checker. Then, I have a text to read aloud to myself. If it doesn't sound good to me, I change it. Yes, I do use an AI to assist me. In my earlier years, I tried to find an editor from two other websites, but there was no one interested in this kind of story. Again, thanks for taking your time to read and ask questions.
Terry