Hello,
I made some small corrections to the story.
I changed from "click" to "clique" which is the correct word. I knew that at some level, but it came out wrong when I was writing.
One paragraph said Kelly was doing XYZ, but it should have been Blanca.
Thanks to those who pointed these errors out. Let me know if there's anything else in this story. (or any other of my other stories.)
Thanks for reading my stories. Please feel free to let me know what you think.
Mary