Eddie Davidson: Blog

I am *REALLY* happy with the response to Homeowner's Association.

I have published the first 6 chapters which constitute the Tour of the facility. I did my best to really breathe life into these places. I hope I laid a framework that may even inspire other authors to write stories in Sunny Manor. I created a public Universe on SOL for it to add stories anyone else writes.

That being said I am starting the next "Section" of the story which is where the family must decide to stay or go.

Many of you may as you read this think that a clothing optional/kink friendly community is over the top.

In England, they have a TV show on public TV where people get fully naked (no pixels) and choose who they want to date. Just for no real reason other than it is fair at the end of the show the person picking must get naked too.

Sounds impossible to someone who still remember's Janet Jacksons nipple causing a meltdown in America.

In Japan, I am told they have a TV show where female contestants have to guess the dick revealed through various holes is their husband and then make it cum first to win a prize. I don't know if that is porn or real but if I wrote it into the story it would seem over the top.

In many countries they have Naked and Afraid, a man and woman are dropped off naked in the woods. Granted, they pixelate it here in America but they do show butt crack sometimes. (not sure why) - still its a vicarious thrill to watch them huddle together in the rain and the woman is like "My husband is watching this!" and the guy is like "Cool, well I am cold though"

In some Universities in the United States they have an actual nude week every year where the students are encouraged to take classes in the nude. It seems insane but they were streaking on campuses way back in the 70s. When I write a NIS story I always feel like my readers may not believe it so I have to add more plausibility.

If you read the HOA story you may at times wonder how such a place could stand a legal challenge.

First, keep in mind it is in Florida where Crystal Meth is the state bird for some reason and people who aren't driving drunk are issued a ticket. Okay, I am kidding but you know a news story about "Florida Man" is probably going to involve someone's ear or penis getting bitten off, right?

They built way out in the boonies with their own sewage, electric, etc out of county jurisdiction. Also, keep in mind there really are kink friendly clothing optional communities IN Tampa.There was a reality TV show about how many clothing optional communities there were and the real estate agent that caters to them.

I believe within the next decade there will be a BDSM game show on American Television where contestants are hung by their tits and spanked etc to endure punishments and see how long they can stand it for money. There will be a Celeb version where fading stars will come on and sit in electric chairs and get a mild shock for the amusement of the home viewer. I know it sounds crazy but I think its coming.

I am hopeful you will grant me the benefit of the doubt as you read the HOA story.

My main concern is the length of the story. I know some people get intimidated by long stories while others won't bother until it is complete and lengthy because they want an epic.

I also plan to continue the Summer School story. I just needed a refreshing break before I stick a ginger root up Clair's ass like she so richly deserves for all her shenanigans.

I've posted chapter four of Homeowner's Association A Big Deal at Sunny Manor (BDSM). This story follows a BDSM couple when they move into a kink-friendly/clothing optional community in Florida.

I have chapter five and six in the edit process right now. ETA is one a day for them.

The first few chapters set the tone for the story. The story starts to show some of the rules in practice. Every location they visit on the tour is named for a reason.

I wanted Sunny Manor to feel like a tour through Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory only fetish-inspired. Inside the steam-inspired are wonderous surprises to the young man telling the story of things he has never seen or only seen in pictures.

Minerva's Market, DeSade's Pantry, Chez Pichard, all of these places I wanted to feel real to you and seem memorable. I wanted you to smell the smells and feel like this place could exist. There are real clothing optional kink friendly resorts. Caliente is a good example.They like Sunny Manor have legitimate rules and membership agreements that protect them and visitors. It isn't a free-for-all fuck fest.

That being said I wanted Sunny Manor to be more than just Caliente and so I placed it in a remote section of Florida between Land O Lakes and New Port Richey. They have their own garbage, sewage, etc out there so they can avoid dealing with the county, etc.

They keep to themselves, haven't had serious crime in years. Everyone that lives there is affluent and there is a security gate around the permiter that looks like a medieval fortress. It is like that in most nudist resorts. People don't lock their doors because they don't have any place to keep the keys (well they make fobs now but not everyone wears one) and it works just fine.

I've turned on voting because I think at chapter 4 I am ready for that constructive feedback as to whether this is an homage to Mister Archie's "Homeowner's Association" or it is not. I'd like you to give it to chapter six before you expect the real story to emerge though.

I don't have the authority to be a reviewer but I wanted to suggest a good short story for fans of Femdom.

It is a nice short story. I wish it had been longer. I wish it had delved into the wifes motivations. I didn't want her to be a ruthless Dicktatress that is just cruel. I saw in her that she wanted to be strict and at the same time she did feel something for her husband. She wasn't out fucking other dudes/using this as an excuse to go have sex with strangers.

I like that. She wanted to train her husband and instead of bringing home creampies for him to eat, he'd have to eat his own.

That being said, I suggest taking a look at Mike McGiffords Sniffles a New Way of Life.

As an aside, Master McGifford will be making a cameo in Homeowner's Associate a Big Deal At Sunny Manor I am writing. I like to write cameos of people who inspire me into my stories as an homage. If you see yourself reflected there - you'll know why.

I thought that perhaps as I reached 30 chapters people were losing interest.

The readership has dropped from 1,000+ to 400.
Granted there was a short hiatus for a while but few can pump up quality chapters every day or so.

I thought at best what I should do is create a NEW story to continue it.

After receiving several VERY flattering posts from readers who like the work I assure you I will not just tack on a summary ending. I will howevr most likely start a "New" section or story that picks up where it lefts off not to leave you in the dark.

However, as much I love writing in my cousin Clair's head as she is trained - I have to take a little break from the character for a bit for my own sanity.

That being said, I've started the HOA series and am about to post up chapter two. This story starts out slow but please give it at least six chapters before you make a decision about it. The first chapter really helps to put you in Matt's head as he tells the story about how he moves to Sunny Manor: A Kink Friendly Community.

Chapter three is where I think it starts to get good.

I just posted chapter 29 of Naked on Summer Vacation: Slut Summer Camp. It is a story set in the 1980s where my Aunt taught my cousin and her friends a little lesson in discipline.

It has taken 30 chapters to get to the first week of this training. I am not sure if it would be interesting to read everything day by day over the summer. I can continue the story though if there is interest.

That being said, I could also shift gears and focus on a new project. I have plenty of ideas for a new story but the one that I am most interested in doing is a COMPLETE Reboot of the story "Homeowner's association" by Mister Archie.

https://storiesonline.net/s/18082/homeowners-association

In this story, a BDSM couple move in with their kids to a BDSM friendly community and they deal with it. Sadly, Mister Archie stopped writing the story a long time ago and it is abandoned. This would be an homage/inspired by but not a retelling of the same story.

First, I'd have to change the title. "Homeowner's association" doesn't tell you much.

Shit, I deal with my HOA everyday about crap with the lawn mower being too loud or someone's fence being the wrong shade of white. That sounds boring as fuck. I'd need the title to reflect that this is "Shady Acres: Bondage Community" or something like that.

This could be a campground or private community that is clothing optional/kink friendly with specific rules in public places. It is fine to raise kids here as long as you understand those rules and respect them. This is because kids are protected from exploitation or abuse just like in a normal clothing optional community (those are real places but rarely are they kink-friendly). There are some in Tampa that are more adult oriented that are though. Google "Caliente Tampa" if you are interested.

The title of the story needs to grab the reader right away and give them some idea of what is inside. "It's not cheating if you watch" for instance tells you what you need to know.

"Fifty Shades of Fragernackle Bullshit" is what I'd call a story about dealing with my frustrating Home Owner's Association in vanilla mundane life.

Secondly, I have three ideas for the narrative and I wanted to solicit your thoughts.

1. Uber Driving Slut: There are women (Hotwives mostly) who are driving Uber and then sucking dicks for a little extra cash. Some put photos on Twitter, some just show pictures to their hubbies.

In this story, a woman is layed off from her job at the local school, and she wants to get some excitement in her life. She tells her husband they are moving to Shady Acres. She plans to be an Uber Driving Slut, and get kinky/lead an alternative lifestyle. Their kids are older but they have friends in high school with two moms, transgender students etc so they aren't completely in the dark about alternative lifestyles.

What makes this story interesting, is that the husband has no desire to do this and is not a "Master" Type. However, the wife needs him to apply discipline to her as motivation. She has some hangups about being a total slut just for fun.

"Harry, I want you to spank me when I get too full of myself." "Harry, when I get lazy I want you to spank me so that I will go drive Uber"

I could also stipulate that this community is Male-Dom only, so they must apply/appear as a Male dominated household even though both the mom and her two daughters are free-thinkers.

The story will focus on the different family members and even change perspective (be told from their point of view).

2. I am not sure what I'd call this one but it would follow more of the plot of the HOA story. In that one, it was told by the submissive although I am thinking either third person narrative or told from the eldest son's perspective.

His Father has always been fairly upfront about his kink. He has a leather workshop, etc but nothing sexual in front of his kids. His mother passed away when they were young but it appeared they were both equals in the relationship.

since then, the father has dated submissive women but over the last 6 years he has moved in what the boy calls "The Submissive". He doesn't call her "Mom".

She takes care of the house and the kids and answers to the father but again - she doesn't prance around naked or anything like that in the living room.

The Father says he is going to marry her and move them into a "Shady Acres" but that there will be some changes based on community rules. That includes clothing optional, and that means he and his wife will be naked frequently in and outside of the house.

This is a common conversation when families decide to move into nudist resorts. Often, at first before their kids hit puberty they are excited and don't care but as they become teenagers they get embaressed and think their parents are stupid. In this case, that is his initial reaction.

One of his sisters will agree with him, and the other will think it's cool.

3. HOA: I could just to try to pick up where he left off and write the rest of the story?

I realized no one else is probably willing to run with the idea so I may as well volunteer. If I volunteer though I'd like to know what you like or if you like it at all.

Note: Whatever I do, it would be in the vein of many of my past stories.