Eddie Davidson: Blog

I don't know if you've seen this commercial or heard about it in late night TV show monologues but it is awesome.

A sexy brunette is given a Pelaton bike for Christmas. She has this Stepford wife glare in her eyes as she thanks her husband for the gift of (checks notes) "Exercise so she can look better for him."

The commercial is pretty harmless but it is easy to read into it from her exasperated sighs and pleading looks in the camera that she really doesn't want to get up at 5am every single day and do this bike - but she wants to impress her husband and keep it tight.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pShKu2icEYw

There is the commercial to see it for yourself.

I am really focused right now on writing my "Keeping the Womenfolk in Line: Cumming of Age" story. I don't want to shift focus but I had two ideas last night I wanted to offer to those of you who write stories/want to write stories and see where you take it.

IDEA ONE:

What if that Pelaton Mom had a near adult son and we start the story something like this:

The mom is fairly hot but a little improvement. She wants to get fit for the New Year to impress her husband. She knows she needs more than just a bike and her own gumption.

She tells her nearly adult son that she wants him to help her with diet because she always cheats/loses motivation.

"Be as brutal as you can! I mean really strict," she suggests.

"You wont' do what I tell you" he has been down this road before and knows his mom rarely sticks to her diet plans and exercise fads.

"Yes, I will! This time I am serious! We just have to keep it a secret from your dad. Anything else is fair game!" she insists.

"Fine Mom, undress"

"What?"

"yeah, I need to see what areas of your body we are working with."

"Okay, thats a little much"

"See? I told you that you wouldn't do what I said," the son shrugs it off and goes back to watching TV.

"Well, that's a little perverted, don't you think?" she says.

"You'd undress for a doctor who needs to examine you. I need to see your problem areas and so do you. In fact, I want you to exercise in the nude so that your tight fitting yoga pants don't hide the jiggle when you bend over," he says quite seriously. "Don't worry. Dad will never find out. You'll exercise right here in the garage. I'll create a diet for you, and you'll have to trust me. The first time you refuse my orders then we are done"

"But what if your ideas are unreasonable?" she asks.

"Then you shouldn't be asking me to take charge if you think I'd be unreasonable. You don't tell a Doctor that you are only going to take half the prescription and treatment he is giving you. You either do it or you don't do it. Take it or leave it," he says its not a negotiation.

The story unfolds with the son taking control over her diet, exercise, lifestyle, etc for the rest of the year.

IDEA TWO:

Pelaton Mom's bike comes with a daily dose of "Stepfordexia";

"A powerful suggestive drug that makes exercise seem important even to the laziest fat-ass"

Side effects may include: Never feeling good enough, desiring to prove your devotion to your husband, random nudity, strangely submissive sexual desires, occasional bursts of housekeeping, and bloating.

In other words a traditional mind control story about the Stepford Mom struggling with the realization she has this compulsion to behave contrary to her nature and obey her husband.

Thoughts?

On December 20th (At least for North America) the Witcher series will be released on Netflix.

Many of you already know the books and video games.

If you don't, a simple Google search will tell you the main character "Geralt of Rivia" is a multi-faceted protagonist. He isn't just a brute or an adventure hero. He has years of bigotry against his kind for being mutants and yet people come to him when they need monsters killed.

The setting is a fantasy version of the 14th-15th century Europe -where Magic has crossed over into the world and pulled in demons, dwarves, elves from other realms. It doesn't treat them the same as most Lord of the Rings-ish stories. The elves are second-class citizens at best for instance. It is a richly developed dark fantasy world.

He has many loves and the series never shy's away from sexuality. There is an entire scene with this stuffed Unicorn that you don't want to miss.

Is anyone planning to write stories to coincide with the release on Netflix? I plan to binge watch. Unfortunately, the Holidays prevent me from having time to write and keep up with my stories during the last two weeks of the year. I will still be knee-deep in the "Keeping the Womenfolk in Line- cumming of age" story.

However, I already have some ideas for what tales I'd tell. I may not write about Geralt. I might write about Triss and Yennifer after they tie up Geralt to teach him a lesson in trying to romance them both. I might also add in Ciri now that she is a woman to join in on the fun.

My question to you is would you write a story set in that universe and if so what would yours be about?

If you are like me and follow all the amateur porn on twitter you will see there are wild people out there who make their living doing the outrageous.

You might see an uber driving hot-mom who relishes the opportunity to record her sucking off a guy she drove in the backseat of the car.

You might see a BDSM couple that regular see what large object(s) they can fit up the wifes ass and stretch her cunt out.

You might see the prettiest asian girls on their backs with their legs spread spraying enema water all over another girl who has a funnel in her mouth and is expected to drink it all.

You might see a family of identical triplet sisters who lez out regular for camshows.

The list goes on. Sluts who snort cum like it is cocaine off a mirror, brazillian women taking turns pissing and shitting on a birthday cake in a pavillion and then slicing it up and eating it like its a party.

If you read the news you hear other wild stories. An entire nude week at a university where students attend class in the nude.

A mother/daughter BDSM mistress/slave team who perform shows and can confirm they are blood relatives.

I once saw a bunch of pictures of a family on vacation. The mother had huge tits and she set them on the son's heads in the photos. The two daughters wore skimpy little elf costumes at christmas with no bottoms. They were playful but no one was having sex in the pictures - just flirty fun. They were the inspiration for my Thanksgiving story: Getting Stuffed at Thanksgiving.

However, as I wrote it I couldn't help but think when people read this they won't believe people like this exist. Even with my own eyes I had seen people that not only exist but take snapshots of it and upload it to the internet for anyone to look at.

I would never write a scene in a story about a bunch of women who show up at a pavillion in a park in the nude and take turns pissing all over a birthday cake while someone films it before they eat it. That would seem so over the top.

Yet, I saw a 5 part video of the very thing happening on Twitter.

I mention this because I like plausible stories with realistic characters and yet I want very much to write the characters who often revel in their debauched/sluttiness.

My latest story "Keeping the Womenfolk in line: Cumming of Age" features some of my normal themes:

A shy nerdy guy telling the story - that makes him more relatable.

I hate stories where the guy has all the answers and everything works out for him. Give me a Gilligan before you give me a Magnum PI.

How else can I watch my shy-nerd grow into something if he already starts out fully evolved?

In this story, the girls are slutty and if you read my "Do you have a big dick, why not?" story you may see some similiarities with Juliette and Betty. They'd probably get along pretty well.

They are different though and they have different driving factors but they have a lot in common too.

My question to you is this:
Do you like it if I continue to play with stories that fall into this category/with similar themes or do you want me to tell totally different stories?

If so - tell me what you think they are. I can't write vampires or space/time travel. If you read my stuff though and you think you know a story idea that would interest me/I could write -let me know.

There will be some twists in this story and I don't want to spoil it for you -but if you are a fan of my work you are going to see the common themes. There are some things I really just enjoy writing about and this is one of them - with a different setup.

It is kind of like basketball. You can play the same game with the same rules and even the same players but there are different strategies and setups.

Someone suggested that I was playing it safe by writing what I know.

I've also done historical fiction and it went over pretty poorly for the most part. I probably need to go back to my old stuff and edit it/polish it but almost no one read it back then and few commented on it. I really liked my Reba fan fiction but I guess there was no audience for the red-headed sassy-country queen to get into sexual situations with Cheyenne and her neighbor Norma Jean.

I know I've improved in editing my stories a lot since then.

Is there one you'd prefer I revisit? add a chapter to or continue?

I still have plans to finish Slut Summer School and the Vulgus homage "My brother's revenge part II" - in fact both have chapters in edit but I don't want to focus on more than one story at a time. I learned my lesson the hard way.

Anyone willing to write a good BDSM story for Thanksgiving?

I can't say enough good things about this story.

https://storiesonline.net/s/20945/the-dream-by-mike

It is by Mike McGifford. It covers a BDSM couple with kids who have hidden their private kinky lives from them/as they struggle with the overlaps that start to become obvious.

It is a prequel in part to the HOA story I wrote because it is about the neighbors that live next door - Karen and Mike. I wrote them in as an homage to Mike and now he is writing their origin story.

He just posted up a new chapter and it is getting better and better with each chapter.