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This is a new thing for me. In my other multi-chapter stories, I know where the story is going to go. In this one, I've got chapters one and two written. The second chapter will involve Jeremy's parents and sister getting in on the fun. After that, I don't know. Maybe it will end up with the ladies masturbating Jeremy in the swimming pool. Maybe it will involve Jeremy getting his girlfriend involved, or his sister bringing a boyfriend or a girlfriend to the party, or his aunt bringing a lover into the action. We'll see.

This story came from a discussion that I read on another forum, about women selling their breast milk. It's evidently a real thing, although the only place where you can buy it straight from the tit is in Japan. (At least legally, that is. I'll bet that if you look for it elsewhere, you'll probably find it.)

But it got me thinking about how such a thing could happen, and how it would work. This story is the result. I tried to make it sound just like a woman being interviewed. My editor, Athalia, asked at one point if I was channeling her story "The Dorm Mother" (which I edited), because the tone was similar. Well, I wasn't trying to, but she was right about the similarity. I guess there are only so many ways you can approach the subject of a woman telling the story of finding a perfectly sensible way to support herself and still get her jollies. The narrators of these two stories have a lot in common! I bet they'd understand each other perfectly.

I've just posted chapter nine, the final chapter of New Arcadia. I really can't see where the story can go any further. It's not the end of the series, though. I've been working on "Liz's Story" for a while and hope to have it finished in a week or so.

Chapter nine has a number of elements that were lacking in previous stories: anal sex, double penetration, and pregnant sex. I hope that this isn't too much of a departure for those who have enjoyed the previous chapters. It just seemed like the right way to take the story, with George having "done it all" and completed his sexual progress from bashful exhibitionist to sexual savant. Maybe I should have waited until George got his "gold band" but it wouldn't have added anything to the story arc.

This is a story I wrote for a contest on another site. What I've tried to do is introduce a premise that could actually work in the Real World, and extend it to include the usual elements of erotica. There really are such "Daredevil" clubs, and there are masturbation clubs, so I think that mutual masturbation in an adventure-club setting would be entirely workable. Since most men masturbate, and most adventurous women do, too, why not get them together in an environment where they can watch each other do it, without fear of pregnancy, or of being rejected as a sexual partner, or of proving to be disappointing as a sexual partner?

The other element of the story, of course, is having kindred souls, with kindred hang-ups about their imperfect bodies, getting together. It's the old "you can't judge a book by its cover" story, with the addition that we often judge ourselves by our own "covers" ... the bodies we have ... and short-change ourselves in the process.

Those who've been reading the New Arcadia stories lately will notice a few differences. For one thing, there's a "New Arcadia" Series, with the original story sharing space with new ones. The original story, as narrated by George, remains intact as a single story with multiple chapters. Chapter six, which was narrated by Louise, was removed, but will reappear as a separate story within the series. It was replaced with a new Chapter 6, narrated by George, which introduces two new characters. Actually, if you've read my stories, you've already met them: Dick and Liz from "A Very Private Beach." Their joining the cast, so to speak, has opened up some interesting story prospects, so I'll continue to add to that story.

Also in the series is a new story called "Denise's Story." You'll remember that Denise was the teenager who greeted George and jacked him off in the first chapter of the original story. The new story give me the chance to tell a story from a teenage girl's point of view. "Denise's Story" and "Louise's Story" will be followed in due time by "Bruce's Story" in which her brother tells what it's like for a boy to grow up in New Arcadia and experience his first fucks after initiation. I hope you enjoy them!