Writing A Blunt Needle was a bit of a downer, so I decided to write something with the same opening but a much different, much more upbeat ending, and this story was the result. It has the same beginning (first ten paragraphs) as A Blunt Needle but a much different and much happier ending.
This story is A Weekend to Remember, in which a woman turns fantasy into incestuous reality, retold from the perspective of the woman’s 14-year-old nephew. All the actual quoted speech is exactly the same in both versions, but the dialog attributions, the descriptions of the activities, and the internal thoughts of the narrator have been changed to reflect the different viewpoint.